Title: Kaji Suzahara
Description: The Black Wolf of Tokyo
Description: The Black Wolf of Tokyo
Lupine Shadow - January 11, 2006 04:44 PM (GMT)
Username: Lupine Shadow
Character's Name: (Surname first) Suzahara, Kaji
Character's Picture:
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 180 lbs.
Nationality: Japanese/ American
Grade Level: Third year
Affiliation: Unknown
Appearance: At 5'9" 180lbs, Kaji is a sinewy warrior. His built is lean and sculpted, built for speed and near feline or in many cases, lupine grace.
Kaji's hair is jet black and often times trailing to his shoulders, sometimes gelled, and sometimes slicked back. The man's eyes are a bright and haunting blue, something he inherited from his American mother, and his face well it is truly beautiful, trailing closely on the feminine.
Special Traits: Kaji has a black dragon tattooed on both of his forearms and a wolf howling at the moon on his back. His scars, well they are plenty and scattered all about his battle hardened frame.
He has what look like claw marks on his left shoulder just below the collar bone and a stab wound on his back just below the wolf's paws. On his face, he has only a short blade scar across the bridge of his nose, a scar that seems more to add character to his face than actually mar its almost womanly beauty.
Weapons: Twin Katana for a duel and throwing knives for distance combat.
Techniques:
+Hena-woten- The Hena-woten isn't a physical technique, instead it attacks the mind of an opponent. By concentrating and locking eyes with the target, Kaji can incite a trance that brings woe and horror to his opponents and distracts them from the real battle at hand.
+Shine Soul Echi Gori- This technique is a self educed mind over matter mantra that lets Kaji ignore pain, ignore his limitations and attack an opponent with everything he has. While using this technique, his chi flares about him in an ebony flame and his blue eyes take on a violet tinge.
+ Black Wolf Gambit- This technique charges Kaji's sword or his fist with chi energy, since it is his chi it shines a vibrant violet with streaks of ebony flame. This attack allows Kaji to strike an opponent, siphoning off a large amount of that opponent's chi energy, into himself and sometimes allows him to copy knowledge and techniques from others. As the name suggests however, this attack is a gamble, for if he fails to connect or the opponent is some how able to counter, well Kaji is left rather drained.
Strong points: Kaji is fast, extremely so, with or without his swords. Despite being a swordsman in his heart, Kaji is also a good hand to hand combatant. Kaji's physical strength is often belied by his physical appearance, especially when dressed, hiding his physic.
Weakness: As it is one of his strengths, so is it a weakness...Kaji doesn't look particularly strong, especially dressed in the flowing garments or baggy clothes that he is fond of. Kaji's shoulder with the claw mark still hurts him from time to time, it had to be reconstructed and he is a few seconds slower with that arm than his other. Most of Kaji's techniques require large amounts of his chi to be expelled, so he must always be extremely strategic in his using of his skills.
Mental Strengths: Kaji is confident to a tee, however this is not a vain confidence but rather one born of faith in God. Kaji can look at any situation and remain totally composed because of his faith, believing that all things have a purpose in the long run.
Mental Weaknesses: The opposite sex. Kaji is horribly shy, especially around beautiful women. He is also honorable and would never intentionally strike a woman and thus when girls are about, Kaji is a man faced with his kryptonite.
History: Born in Tokyo, as a descendant of the famous Suzahara military family, Kaji had a rather normal life. Born in the American military base, in which his father served, he was a small babe and continued to be slight of weight and height for most of his life.
Kaji's father took on his mother's name, knowing how prestigious it was in Japan and moved to Tokyo shortly after the end of his military service. While not welcomed with the most open of arms, Jason "Suzahara" became respected by the ancient Suzahara clan and himself learned their personal martial arts. He worked hard at it, until he had not only mastered them, but combined a style that he had learned from the Israeli army Krav Maga.
It is this modified version of the family fighting style that Kaji now uses and his body is without a doubt, as dangerous a weapon as any sword. Kaji however practices the martial arts not out of a wish to harm, but rather to better himself and his spirit. You see Kaji’s belief is that of not only his Christian Father, but his Shinto mother. He is deeply moral and spiritual, meaning that he is not one to fight meaninglessly or with rage in his heart. Because of this he is revered as a fighter and a student, and became the black lone wolf of Tokyo, because of his dark hair and his lone wolf’s nature, coupled with his incredible skill.
Sample Post:
A slow yawn escaped his lips, and Kaji Suzahara rose from the dead with a series of jerky motions. Well, not really the dead, though there wasn't really a lot of difference, when Kaji was asleep. The building around the young man could have burned down and he never would have known. Kaji was what his father called a hard sleeper. But then that was putting things lightly. Kaji could sleep through natural disasters; floods, earthquakes, perhaps even a plague of locusts of two. And of course school.
Looking at the pile of rubble that had been his alarm clock that was before the slamming of his hand Suzahara could only guess at how much damage he had done. Not to the clock, he had a hundred of those, broke at least four in a week, but the school day. God, he had a test in History. He had to get up, had to pull on something over his "Hello Kitty" Boxers and get out the door, but the more he thought about it, the more it sounded like a bad idea. Nope, he should just go back to sleep. Tell his history teacher that his cat got hit by a bus, yeah that would do it.
"Beep, beep."
Kaji swore. Crap, he had had to make a plan. Things always went bad when he had a plan.
Rolling out of bed and looking out his window, Kaji could only stare wide eyed as he watched his History teacher, dressed in black leather, slide off the back of a street bike that he had never known she owned. She took off her helmet and Kaji knew he was in trouble. She looked soooo pissed.
Then he watched her lift the bike's seat. She pulled out a whip.
Holy crap...
Who fought with a whip? Heck, who knew counters to whip attacks? Crap...
Getting up, going to his closet, Suzahara pulled on a pair of black jeans and a Metallica t-shirt. Then he pulled out one of his Katana and sat on his bed as he heard his mom let the teacher in. Kaji knew he had been set up, but all he could do was get ready to take it like a man.
I'm done now...please evaluate...
Character's Name: (Surname first) Suzahara, Kaji
Character's Picture:
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 10"
Weight: 180 lbs.
Nationality: Japanese/ American
Grade Level: Third year
Affiliation: Unknown
Appearance: At 5'9" 180lbs, Kaji is a sinewy warrior. His built is lean and sculpted, built for speed and near feline or in many cases, lupine grace.
Kaji's hair is jet black and often times trailing to his shoulders, sometimes gelled, and sometimes slicked back. The man's eyes are a bright and haunting blue, something he inherited from his American mother, and his face well it is truly beautiful, trailing closely on the feminine.
Special Traits: Kaji has a black dragon tattooed on both of his forearms and a wolf howling at the moon on his back. His scars, well they are plenty and scattered all about his battle hardened frame.
He has what look like claw marks on his left shoulder just below the collar bone and a stab wound on his back just below the wolf's paws. On his face, he has only a short blade scar across the bridge of his nose, a scar that seems more to add character to his face than actually mar its almost womanly beauty.
Weapons: Twin Katana for a duel and throwing knives for distance combat.
Techniques:
+Hena-woten- The Hena-woten isn't a physical technique, instead it attacks the mind of an opponent. By concentrating and locking eyes with the target, Kaji can incite a trance that brings woe and horror to his opponents and distracts them from the real battle at hand.
+Shine Soul Echi Gori- This technique is a self educed mind over matter mantra that lets Kaji ignore pain, ignore his limitations and attack an opponent with everything he has. While using this technique, his chi flares about him in an ebony flame and his blue eyes take on a violet tinge.
+ Black Wolf Gambit- This technique charges Kaji's sword or his fist with chi energy, since it is his chi it shines a vibrant violet with streaks of ebony flame. This attack allows Kaji to strike an opponent, siphoning off a large amount of that opponent's chi energy, into himself and sometimes allows him to copy knowledge and techniques from others. As the name suggests however, this attack is a gamble, for if he fails to connect or the opponent is some how able to counter, well Kaji is left rather drained.
Strong points: Kaji is fast, extremely so, with or without his swords. Despite being a swordsman in his heart, Kaji is also a good hand to hand combatant. Kaji's physical strength is often belied by his physical appearance, especially when dressed, hiding his physic.
Weakness: As it is one of his strengths, so is it a weakness...Kaji doesn't look particularly strong, especially dressed in the flowing garments or baggy clothes that he is fond of. Kaji's shoulder with the claw mark still hurts him from time to time, it had to be reconstructed and he is a few seconds slower with that arm than his other. Most of Kaji's techniques require large amounts of his chi to be expelled, so he must always be extremely strategic in his using of his skills.
Mental Strengths: Kaji is confident to a tee, however this is not a vain confidence but rather one born of faith in God. Kaji can look at any situation and remain totally composed because of his faith, believing that all things have a purpose in the long run.
Mental Weaknesses: The opposite sex. Kaji is horribly shy, especially around beautiful women. He is also honorable and would never intentionally strike a woman and thus when girls are about, Kaji is a man faced with his kryptonite.
History: Born in Tokyo, as a descendant of the famous Suzahara military family, Kaji had a rather normal life. Born in the American military base, in which his father served, he was a small babe and continued to be slight of weight and height for most of his life.
Kaji's father took on his mother's name, knowing how prestigious it was in Japan and moved to Tokyo shortly after the end of his military service. While not welcomed with the most open of arms, Jason "Suzahara" became respected by the ancient Suzahara clan and himself learned their personal martial arts. He worked hard at it, until he had not only mastered them, but combined a style that he had learned from the Israeli army Krav Maga.
It is this modified version of the family fighting style that Kaji now uses and his body is without a doubt, as dangerous a weapon as any sword. Kaji however practices the martial arts not out of a wish to harm, but rather to better himself and his spirit. You see Kaji’s belief is that of not only his Christian Father, but his Shinto mother. He is deeply moral and spiritual, meaning that he is not one to fight meaninglessly or with rage in his heart. Because of this he is revered as a fighter and a student, and became the black lone wolf of Tokyo, because of his dark hair and his lone wolf’s nature, coupled with his incredible skill.
Sample Post:
A slow yawn escaped his lips, and Kaji Suzahara rose from the dead with a series of jerky motions. Well, not really the dead, though there wasn't really a lot of difference, when Kaji was asleep. The building around the young man could have burned down and he never would have known. Kaji was what his father called a hard sleeper. But then that was putting things lightly. Kaji could sleep through natural disasters; floods, earthquakes, perhaps even a plague of locusts of two. And of course school.
Looking at the pile of rubble that had been his alarm clock that was before the slamming of his hand Suzahara could only guess at how much damage he had done. Not to the clock, he had a hundred of those, broke at least four in a week, but the school day. God, he had a test in History. He had to get up, had to pull on something over his "Hello Kitty" Boxers and get out the door, but the more he thought about it, the more it sounded like a bad idea. Nope, he should just go back to sleep. Tell his history teacher that his cat got hit by a bus, yeah that would do it.
"Beep, beep."
Kaji swore. Crap, he had had to make a plan. Things always went bad when he had a plan.
Rolling out of bed and looking out his window, Kaji could only stare wide eyed as he watched his History teacher, dressed in black leather, slide off the back of a street bike that he had never known she owned. She took off her helmet and Kaji knew he was in trouble. She looked soooo pissed.
Then he watched her lift the bike's seat. She pulled out a whip.
Holy crap...
Who fought with a whip? Heck, who knew counters to whip attacks? Crap...
Getting up, going to his closet, Suzahara pulled on a pair of black jeans and a Metallica t-shirt. Then he pulled out one of his Katana and sat on his bed as he heard his mom let the teacher in. Kaji knew he had been set up, but all he could do was get ready to take it like a man.
I'm done now...please evaluate...
moonsun - January 16, 2006 10:53 AM (GMT)
I like your char but, I seem to find no mental strong points or weakness. I may be reading it wrong so, if you could explain, it would be greatly appreciated ^^ everything is fine other than that.
Lupine Shadow - January 26, 2006 02:13 PM (GMT)
Well I didn't write any before, sorry about that. They are in there now though.