Yes, I'm one of those scary fanfic-writing people. *makes a face*

In any case, here's my fanfic:

Hellwach

I guess not much happens in the first chapter, but I'll post the next in a few days, so. Do enjoy. It's a continuation of the anime, so Kira and all get introduced.

This is very interesting to read. Laplace seems evil in this, we're not sure whether that was intended, but we'll have to see what happens later on.

So, Megu is dead in this? It appears so. We wonder what Suigintou is going to do now.

Edit: You know, while we were reading the blurb, and the thing about how they must become human and all, I thought to myself 'If they become real girls, I wonder what would happen when they deal with their first period?' Nothing really to do with your fanfic, but it's an interesting thought because as dolls they don't have it [obviously].

Just me being me, carry on!

Megu is indeed dead. It's not really a huge topic in the story except for the fact that it deals a severe blow to Gin-sama and weakens her emotionally.

The period thing I'm definitely planning to cover at some point. Kana, ever the comic relief character, is constantly popping up and going on about risque topics such as that.

UPDATE: Chapter 2, "Auferstehung," has been posted.

I see you managed to work in the small portion I wrote. Nice.

Very well-written as always. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Nicely done, Rose Crystal

Can't wait for the next ch

Hey, what does the titles mean?

Hellwach is "wide awake" (according to RC, at least--can't really confirm it, seeing as how I don't know any German), as seen in the thread subtitle. She hasn't told me what the others mean, though.

Chapter 1: "Alicespiel" = Alice Game
Chapter 2: "Auferstehung" = Resurrection
Chapter 3: "Honig" = Honey

A lot of the chapter titles are named after various songs from the Rozen Maiden soundtrack, translated from Japanese to German (example, chapter 3 is taken from the song title Hachimitsu. Beautiful song.)

UPDATE: Chapter 3 has been posted and is up!

I think this has to be my favorite chapter so far.

I lol'd at Gin's criticism of Kun-Kun and Hina's honey problem.

Any idea if Megu's funeral will be shown? That'd be really interesting to see.

I wasn't planning on showing the funeral, but since you're interested, perhaps it will happen.

Gin-Sama is human now! How will Shinku react [Good for you Suigintou, now get me some tea!]. Kira is up to something! I KNOW IT! If Suigintou kisses Kira's ring, does that mean Suigintou will be Kira's medium? That would be weird!

Whoa

Then Gin will be Kira's medium..

This story is definitely twisted

hahaha

I'm just kidding, makes me wonder though...

Chapter 4, "Ausschuss," has just been posted. I don't know if it's up. If it's not, you might be able to try going to chapter 3 first, which might make it appear on the chapter menu.

EDIT: Okay, now it works even without going to chapter 3.

It does work if you go to chapter 3, yes.

As usual, very nice. I've already said what I think about it via IRC, but yeah.

Very good to see Gin adapting to being a human. KIRA IS UP TO SOMETHING! I KNOW KNOW KNOW KNOW IT! So Suigintou is Kira's medium? It appears so. I'm surprised that Shinku isn't jealous or anything, and if she is, she isn't showing it.

Why would anyone be jealous of having to live under the shadow of the fact that, at any moment, some unseen person could drain away all your energy and kill you? :P

Unless you meant Shinku being jealous of Suigintou's humanity, in which case, I'm fairly sure she's happier she doesn't have to deal with what Gin's dealin with.

By the way, what does 'Auchess [spelling?]' mean? Out of curiousity, I don't know German and I didn't see any A/N.

It means "Junk." >D

Chapter 5, "Atem," is up. I hope you like your silly-willy happy chapters, because there are not that many left before the drama sets in... ;)

As always, excellent work.

Jun's "model/porn star" comparison amused me more than it probably should've. (Holy crap, "should've" isn't a word either? WELL FUCK YOU SPELLCHECK)

To be honest, as much as I love the silly stuff (and I honestly do, as you no doubt know by now :P), I'm looking forward to the drama--you've told me a lot about it, and it sounds really exciting!

HOW DOES A FLAT-CHESTED GIRL = PORN STAR??? [she really is... can't argue about that...]

Shinku DOES NOT equals to "porn star"

But "model" equals to Gin though...

Anyway... Looking forward to ch 6!!!

Actually, the human Shinku is quite curvaceous.

Somehow, I can't imagine Shinku being all that curvaceous.

Gin, on the other hand...

Nah, Gin's the one who got shortchanged on the T & A.

Still hot, though...

Needs moar curves. D<

How about you write your own RM fanfic where they become human, then? :P

I would if I could write.

I think you're a good writer. ;_;

Great chapter.

Drama sounds good. I like drama. ^^

..Should've isn't a word? O_o

Not according to my retarded spellcheck. ;)

Some person reviewed the story apparently thinking it was over.

It's far from over, guys. I see this story going for a minimum of fifty chapters.

just so y'know.

50. O_o

I wish you luck with that. I personally lack the patience to finish a huge project.. ^^; It shows on my profile. >.>

A lot of people have reviewed this story and watched it or added it to their favorites, so I have THE PRESSURE on me.

lol. The pressure is often the only motivation I have.

...there isn't enough of it. >.> Maybe my summaries suck.

Shinku... curvy?

I can't imagine THAT

But you're a good writer...

thankyou :D

I may sketch up the characters to show everyone what they'll be looking like, so.

please do~!

do it do it do it do it

I can picture Shinku and Suigintou with curves. However, if it was Hina or Kana...No, just no. It isn't logically possible.

Kekekekekeke.

Anyway, nice chapter. So, because Shinku knows how to change, then Sugintou doesn't have to tell and they know what she's on about anyway!

Chapter 6, "Menschheit," has been uploaded. It shouldn't take long for it to go up, and as previously recommended, try going to the previous chapter first if you can't find it in the chapter menu.

I like writing about cake.

Link to the chapter. I got skillz

Okay, so this one was pretty delayed. That's what happens with birthdays... and hanging out with friends... and guy drama... and and and... :P

You included Yamamoto! :D

Hina's gluttony continues to amuse me.

KIRA FANSERVICE OH MY GOD. XD

very funny

But imagining them in human form is a tad difficult for me, why don't you post some pics?