Title: Kokoa's fanfic
kokoa - October 18, 2007 11:04 AM (GMT)
I've been writing this for a little while, but it took me AGES to find a website to host it that wasn't blocked.
There sould be 8 chapters.
Dream of Something Better
Merines Shinku - October 20, 2007 07:14 AM (GMT)
Ahahahahahaha, that.s cute, especially the Bara-lookalike!!!
Hmmmm... I wonder which sister Anira id a medium of...
it's good i like it!!!
Keep it up kokoa-san!!!
alice_pyon - October 23, 2007 09:35 AM (GMT)
Wow, thats nice kokoa-san!
I demand the continuation now!! :king:
I lyk da story!!
CONTINUE IT~~!!
I lyk da fact that Suigintou is da main-character of da story. Hehe..
SUIGNTOU-SAMA RULESSSSS!!!
kokoa - October 23, 2007 10:07 PM (GMT)
Agreed with alice_pyon. [Gin is my fav too].
I am currently writing the next chap, but amongst school assignments and SNM christmas/halloween/ABC challenge recordings, it's coming along very slowly.
Merines Shinku - October 26, 2007 02:18 AM (GMT)
ahahahaha
take ur time...
but remeber we are waiting for the next chapter...
alice_pyon - October 27, 2007 08:44 AM (GMT)
High-5 kokoa!!
Nice work!!
Go, Gin-chama!!
++ chikarue-chama ++
kokoa - October 28, 2007 09:59 AM (GMT)
Chapter 9 is up. It is called 'a deal is made'
Merines Shinku - November 2, 2007 01:31 AM (GMT)
And I thought Anira or Rina would be Shinku's medium...
This story is confusing me... @.@
kokoa - November 2, 2007 05:32 AM (GMT)
I considered having her as Shinku's medium, but then She'll know instantly what the answers are to all her questions [what happened in alice game, was alice created etc]. I thought that she'd probably get on better with Sui and Sou, then Hina and Kana, and Kira would be errmmm :unsure: .
It should confuse you, as there are many things I have not told you yet. I like to write things out 'backwards' where something has happened, but you don't know what it is, then we gradually find out what happened in the past, along-side present conflict.
Hopefully as the story goes on things should be clearer for you.
:grin:
alice_pyon - November 2, 2007 12:56 PM (GMT)
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
How'd she die? How'd she die?
Suigintou is so in character now.. I like her even more thanks to you! even though I already adore her like my own precious....thing.
^^
Merines Shinku - November 21, 2007 01:44 PM (GMT)
oooooooooooh
im very much interested in this story!!!
I wanna see Shinku!!!!
kokoa - December 2, 2007 09:07 AM (GMT)
Now that my exams and my writing block has ended, I present to you the super long [for me] Chapter 10!
Merines Shinku - December 4, 2007 04:48 AM (GMT)
I LOVE IT!!!!!
That's all that i can say, I LOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!
kokoa - December 7, 2007 09:39 AM (GMT)
Chapter 11 is up! I'm going on a holiday for about 4 weeks, so I can't continue until I get back. Chapter 11 is super long again...
alice_pyon - December 8, 2007 02:37 AM (GMT)
Oooohhhh
Have a nice Christmas and holiday!!
:waving:
Merines Shinku - December 8, 2007 04:26 AM (GMT)
o.O Morielta is a devil desu!!!
...
WHERE'S SHINKU DESU????
T.T I want to see Shinku desu...
kokoa - December 8, 2007 07:39 AM (GMT)
Thankyou. I hope I will...
alice_pyon - December 8, 2007 04:17 PM (GMT)
Morielta's a cool yet baka doll.
Her powers are quite strong temporarily but when something else happens it weakens.
Is that the difference between the Rozen Maidens and the living dolls in their present?
kokoa - December 8, 2007 09:33 PM (GMT)
Merines Shinku: Don't you worry about Shinku, cause I do have something in mind for her, but I can't say much else or i'll give away story...
Alice Pyon: Well, that is one of the differences, but there are many others and cause i'm feeling un-lazy right now, I've compiled a list in the next post.
Both: It's good to see that everyone loves to hate Morielta [heck she is a villain after all...].
kokoa - December 8, 2007 09:45 PM (GMT)
Ok, here is a list for everyone [As a little bonus]!
Differences and Similarities between Rozen Maidens and Living Dolls
[Based on my fic. If you haven't read it you won't understand this.]
Differences
* Living dolls have a Rosa Mystica with a white crystal in the centre, and it only lasts for three years. After three years it 'expires' and the doll needs a new one [which can be purchased at a shop :grin: ]. But if they're given a new one, they lose all their memories of what happened wtih the previous mystica and have to start over again.
Rozen Maidens have a Rosa Mystica with a reddy/pinkky crystal in the middle and it lasts for...ummm...forever. It never expires. The memories of the doll are stored in the Mystica, so if they lose it and then get it back they still have all their previous memories.
*No living doll can fly, even if they have wing decorations. How many countless times have we seen the Maidens fly in battle?
* How a living doll gets a medium, is that they get a silver ring in the box that they got the doll in, and they just put it on. If they own more than one, the rings merge. The rings can be taken off.
For a Rozen Maiden to get a medium, the person has to kiss the ring on her hand [it escapes me which hand it was on]. The medium's ring appears on the new medium's hand and can't come off no matter what.
* For a living doll, a mediium contract can be broken just by the medium taking the ring off. For the Rozen Maiden she gets to decide that the contract is over, and then she has to kiss the medium's ring for the contract to be over.
* Living dolls always have an attack weakness [eg. water, fire, smoke]. Depending on the slyness of the doll, the weakness may or may not be easier find. Rozen Maidens have no attack weakness, although they may have weaknesses that have nothing to do with powers [eg. Suigintou's was Megu, Suiseseki's was her twin].
* Living dolls fight in an Alice game tournament, where the opponent has to be 'dead' before they can win it [although the opponent may not actually be dead, they just have to proclaim that one would have killed the other if it had been a battle to the death]. The winner goes to the next round and so on, until they win the whole thing.The Alice game tournament is held in a stadium.
The Rozen Maiden's Alice game is usually to the death and is held in an N-field. The winner gets the loser's Rosa Mystica and has to fight all the other 6 Maidens to become Alice [win].
Similarities
* Both Rozen Maiden's and Living Dolls are balljoint dolls.
* Both have Rosa Mystica's and can get a medium.
* Both have cases and can choose to sleep in them [although case varities may vary depending on the manufacturer of the doll].
*Both fight using powers bestowed on them by a higher force [Rozen Maiden's was their father, the living dolls was their manufacturer], and they don't get a choice in what their powers are.
There we are!
Merines Shinku - January 11, 2008 01:46 PM (GMT)
o.O
So manyyyyyy
but what abt the next chapter???
me want to see shinkuuuuuuuuuuuu *cries*
lilmenchi - January 12, 2008 04:46 AM (GMT)
I have good news for you, Kokoa should be back from her holiday and have the next chapter up a couple of days <3
I didn't get told anything about when Shinku appears though so I can't help out there ^^;
kokoa - January 13, 2008 08:08 AM (GMT)
Chapter 12 is up and running
I have planned out the next seven or so chapters, and I must say, things shall be getting quite interesting!
Merines Shinku - January 18, 2008 01:49 AM (GMT)
Morielta is a devil but Scylla is a even evil devil!!!!
I hate her.
Shnkuuuuuuuuuuuuu, shinku, shinku, shinku, shinku, shinkuuuuuuuuu!!!
*dies*
kokoa - January 18, 2008 06:55 AM (GMT)
Don't worry I have something planned for Shinku. To put your mind to rest, we'll first hear of her in *flips through notes* not the next chapter [Suigintou has some evil villain butt to kick then] but the chapter after.
alice_pyon - January 19, 2008 06:46 PM (GMT)
Yayy
Swig's gonna kick some evil butt!!
I'm so happy!!
Merines Shinku - January 24, 2008 02:47 PM (GMT)
*sniffs*
What will happen to my dear Shinku?????
You know, i hv alot of question:
What the hell did Kira do?
How come they're still alive?
Where are the other dolls?
HOW ABOUT JUN?????
kokoa - January 24, 2008 10:47 PM (GMT)
You'll find out in time.
Chapter 10 indirectly tells you what Kira did. I know why they're still alive, but you don't. Yet. I know where the other dolls are, but you don't. Yet. I know what happened to Jun, but you don't. Yet.
See, all knowing author knows everything. :grin:
And my fic is also up on Fanfiction.net now. It's the same as the mediaminer version, except i merged chapters 2 and 3, and 4 and 5, so the FF.net version will always be two chapter numbers behind Mediaminer, but the content is the same.
Merines Shinku - January 26, 2008 01:32 PM (GMT)
o.O
Tsumannai...!
I will eternally hate Kira for the rest of my life
kokoa - February 6, 2008 09:12 PM (GMT)
K, for MM it's chapter 13, for FF.Net it's chapter 11, but whatever the next chapter has appeared!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4028039/11/Dre...omething_Betterhttp://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/147182/525627/-is posting links again cause they're on the other page-
Merines Shinku - February 7, 2008 01:58 PM (GMT)
XD
The vomiting part is disgusting, what the hell is that?
Wait, Shinku is up the next chap rite? RITE? THAT'S WHAT YOU SAID!!!
*goes crazy*
kokoa - February 7, 2008 08:44 PM (GMT)
The gold thing in the vomit is relevent to PLOT! Now, Suigintou has something to do in her spare time.~
We'll first HEAR of her in next chappie, and let me tell you, Suigintou will not be too impressed with what she's been up to...
Merines Shinku - February 9, 2008 11:23 AM (GMT)
XD
I can't wait!!!!
Ah, im guessing something good in my point of view?
kokoa - February 23, 2008 06:15 AM (GMT)
Chapter 12/14 is up! reposting links for new page~
FF.Net =
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4028039/12/Dre...omething_BetterMediaminer =
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_ch.php/147182/527592/In this chapter we get so much PLOT including:
-Return of old character, and the re-appearance of a character we haven't seen in a while.
-First appearance of THE MASTER
-First description of the MASTER's house/mansion thing
-Discovery of what an object actually is
-Rikou being referred to as an idiot exactly 8 times.
-A record for the longest chapter yet! [not really PLOT, but who cares.]
-Someone who knows about the Rozen Maidens! OH NO!
-Suigintou getting her wings ripped out by an evil character.
-And also a special re-appearance of Suigintou's hatred for Shinku.
READ IT. To find out more.
Merines Shinku - March 1, 2008 05:55 AM (GMT)
I knew it I KNEW IT
It really WAS Shinku!!!!!!!!
SHINKUUUUUUUUUU
What about hina???
*goes crazy*
kokoa - March 1, 2008 09:41 PM (GMT)
We won't hear from Hina in ages.
[Don't worry about Shinku's next appearance, I have something planned for her!]
Merines Shinku - March 2, 2008 04:49 AM (GMT)
:grin: That's good to hear
It better be something good
kokoa - March 9, 2008 12:52 AM (GMT)
Next chapter has appeared. So much plot has happened including:
*Suigintou witnesses a doll being bashed up
*Suigintou throws a mental attack, due to the voices in her head
*Shinku says her FIRST WORD! Well, in the present of this fanfic she does.
*Suigintou gets visited by a ghost of someone she really hates
Next chapter gets extremely serious. No more laughy-happy-happy from now on.
Read on~ Read on~
Merines Shinku - March 13, 2008 05:27 AM (GMT)
*gasp* Lyn's in a BIG BIG trouble
XD
Imagine Suigintou's face!
ROFL
She forgot her own name, that's just stupid
‘…I don’t remember.’ That was the first thing she said
Keep going, k! Gambatte~!
alice_pyon - March 13, 2008 03:45 PM (GMT)
Arghhh
I'm sorry!!
I have so much to keep up on!!
Deepest apologies..T.T
S..Sh..Shi..Shinku?
I can sort of imagine the last scene if I put together Swig in the manga and the chapel in the anime.. Huh..weird..