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Title: Flo's Fanfiction
Description: Wiederbelebung and Alicenger


Flco - June 1, 2007 06:35 PM (GMT)
Both my fics can be found at Animesuki. :)

Rozen Maiden: Wiederbelebung by Flo
Chapter 0
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Interlude to Memories
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12

Rozen Maiden: Alice no Tame ni! Rozen Sentai Alicenger! by Flo
Chapter 1
Chapter 2

Stormin Norman - June 1, 2007 09:53 PM (GMT)
I just read through chapter 3, and I like it so far. I'll read the rest later when I have time.

Flco - June 2, 2007 04:08 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Stormin Norman @ Jun 1 2007, 03:53 PM)
I just read through chapter 3, and I like it so far. I'll read the rest later when I have time.

Thnak, but please be aware that it's just a prototype, so it's plagued by lousy writing and very very horrible use of English. If I ever finish this fic, I'll be sure to get this a make over repair.

Euphorian - June 2, 2007 10:37 PM (GMT)
Writing prototype = Draft
Chapter 0 = Prologue
Repair = Edit

I'll read it later, when I have time. I skimmed over 'chapter 0', though. It is terribly unprofessional, even in a draft to alternate between script format and narrative, I believe. Additionally, quotes should not be needed in script format.

Unless of course, this is a different type of 'prototype', simply a collection of the idea of the fan-fic for you to remind yourself and thoroughly write later? That would be an outline...

Flco - June 3, 2007 01:59 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Euphorian @ Jun 2 2007, 04:37 PM)
Writing prototype = Draft
Chapter 0 = Prologue
Repair = Edit

I'll read it later, when I have time. I skimmed over 'chapter 0', though. It is terribly unprofessional, even in a draft to alternate between script format and narrative, I believe. Additionally, quotes should not be needed in script format.

Unless of course, this is a different type of 'prototype', simply a collection of the idea of the fan-fic for you to remind yourself and thoroughly write later? That would be an outline...

Thank you and noted <-(ok maybe not entirely) XD . I knew it's unpro from the very beginning, but I'll just keep it like this until the end. (I'm a lazy one XD ) Use of quotes is more or less my style and to differentiate better for me XD .

alice_pyon - June 3, 2007 12:56 PM (GMT)
Flco-san aren't you gonna continue your story? I read it in animesuki and you haven't continued it yet...why???

Doushite?????

Just continue it...'kay?
Oh, by the way, Wiederbelung or so, I mean, Wiederbelebung isn't stuck right? And, I thought Gin was dead? :huh:
:wallbash: it's a little hard to figure out...

Merines Shinku - August 11, 2007 10:24 AM (GMT)
Flo, where's ch. 10?

Flco - August 12, 2007 05:09 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Merines Shinku @ Aug 11 2007, 04:24 AM)
Flo, where's ch. 10?

No chapter 10

But "Interlude to Memories" is up though.

Merines Shinku - August 14, 2007 01:20 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Flco @ Aug 13 2007, 12:09 AM)
QUOTE (Merines Shinku @ Aug 11 2007, 04:24 AM)
Flo, where's ch. 10?

No chapter 10

But "Interlude to Memories" is up though.

Whoa... No ch. 10?

Yet... right?

I don't quite understand "Interlude to Memories", when was Shinku in trouble?
Was it the one she and Suiseiseki was fighting against Kira? Or did I mix this story up with Edge's? :baka:

I'm confused... :mellow:

Flco - August 14, 2007 01:52 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Merines Shinku @ Aug 14 2007, 07:20 AM)
QUOTE (Flco @ Aug 13 2007, 12:09 AM)
QUOTE (Merines Shinku @ Aug 11 2007, 04:24 AM)
Flo, where's ch. 10?

No chapter 10

But "Interlude to Memories" is up though.

Whoa... No ch. 10?

Yet... right?

I don't quite understand "Interlude to Memories", when was Shinku in trouble?
Was it the one she and Suiseiseki was fighting against Kira? Or did I mix this story up with Edge's? :baka:

I'm confused... :mellow:

Yes, happens before Suigintou have to save Shinku and Suiseiseki from Kirakishou. (see chapter 8 and chapter 9 under italic text)

alice_pyon - September 1, 2007 03:49 AM (GMT)
Hey, Flo, you aren't gonna add chapter 10 or are your chronicles finished?
Aww, come on!!! Please?

Flco - September 3, 2007 05:58 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (alice_pyon @ Aug 31 2007, 09:49 PM)
Hey, Flo, you aren't gonna add chapter 10 or are your chronicles finished?
Aww, come on!!! Please?

Estimated chapter need to finish....20++ sumthing, what do you think? I'm still thinking what to writing in ch 11.

Flco - September 4, 2007 10:09 AM (GMT)
Ok Chpt. 10 of RM:W up

Chapter 10

Merines Shinku - September 5, 2007 11:26 AM (GMT)
LOVE IIIIIT!!!!!

That's right Bara! Break her physically and mentally one by one...

Why don't you continue the time when Megu moved?

Im curious of the situation there...

Jz thinking abt Swiggy and Shinku living next to each other makes me rofl :rofl:

Flco - September 9, 2007 02:17 PM (GMT)

Flco - December 1, 2007 09:34 PM (GMT)

Merines Shinku - December 4, 2007 04:58 AM (GMT)
XD The last part was the funniest!!!!




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