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Delight - September 16, 2008 08:55 PM (GMT)
So, I thought it would be nice if there was a thread for fanfics (from outside of forums) recommendation and comments (with spoilers in spoiler tags, of course).

I just finished reading Seven Faces - I spent half of a day reading it. It was the most awesome Rozen Maiden fanfic I have ever read :wub: .
It's so good, that it's like a third season of anime to me :wub: .
It has a well though out, gripping plot, good character development and good narration.
It has plenty of drama (that has much more sense than the depressing buckets of angst and tragedy from Träumend) and Jun is maturing a lot, like in the first series.
The only problem with that I have is that the author has some problems with following speech patterns of the dolls and doesn't include things like "desu".

Did anyone else read it?

My thoughts after finishing reading it:
[spoiler]The whole love and transformation of dolls thing has totally blown my mind. It was interesting to see how poor Jun was dealing with his increasing loneliness caused by departure/death of his close ones. Also, the whole Rozen family/Sakurada family plot was great :D .
All the tragedies gave it a distinct dark and oppressive atmosphere, but almost every element of darkness served moving the plot forward and didn't turn the fanfic into an angstfest.
Also, Jun/Shinku, Jun/Suiseiseki, Jun/Suigintou, Jun/Kirasomething romances :wub: .[/spoiler]

kokoa - September 16, 2008 09:42 PM (GMT)
QUOTE
The only problem with that I have is that the author has some problems with following speech patterns of the dolls and doesn't include things like "desu".


I know that some authors don't like speech patterns [ie. desu, nano etc], and I know it's one of the things that really annoyed me about Suiseseki.

I liked one on FF.Net called 'Broken like a Doll' but I don't think the author is going to finish it [shame].

I really liked seven faces because of the way it was written, and the theory behind the new Alice method.

Delight - September 16, 2008 10:05 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (kokoa @ Sep 17 2008, 12:42 AM)
I know that some authors don't like speech patterns [ie. desu, nano etc], and I know it's one of the things that really annoyed me about Suiseseki.

I meant the way they speak in general, not only verbal ticks.

kokoa - September 17, 2008 06:27 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Delight @ Sep 16 2008, 04:05 PM)
QUOTE (kokoa @ Sep 17 2008, 12:42 AM)
I know that some authors don't like speech patterns [ie. desu, nano etc], and I know it's one of the things that really annoyed me about Suiseseki.

I meant the way they speak in general, not only verbal ticks.

I see what you mean.

Mierna - September 17, 2008 10:59 AM (GMT)
^ If you think about it, "desu", "na no", and "kashira" shouldn't even be used in English Rozen Maiden fanfics. They were used for the Japanese language, and so they shall continue being used in the Japanese language. It's like randomly putting romanized Japanese phrases like "Ohayou!" and "Arigatou" in English fics. It's wrong.

Here's another good fic from FF.net - "You are All I Ever Wanted". It's thirty sentences of Suiseiseki and Souseiseki, and it even includes evil Souseiseki!! :lol: And even DYING Souseiseki!! :smile: :smile:

Delight - September 17, 2008 03:09 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Mierna @ Sep 17 2008, 01:59 PM)
^ If you think about it, "desu", "na no", and "kashira" shouldn't even be used in English Rozen Maiden fanfics.

Heresy :P !
There's no greater thing than Desu in this wretched world - Desu ist Kvlt, Desu ist Krieg, Desu is everything I need. :suiseiseki: .
DESU DESU (...) DESU

QUOTE (Mierna @ Sep 17 2008, 01:59 PM)
They were used for the Japanese language, and so they shall continue being used in the Japanese language. It's like randomly putting romanized Japanese phrases like "Ohayou!" and "Arigatou" in English fics. It's wrong.

Just like "Heil Hitler!" and "Sieg Heil!" in non-german language WWII movies and "Amen" in prayers. It may be "wrong", but Desu is so characteristic for Suiseiseki in the anime that it feels wrong when she doesn't say it :P .

QUOTE (Mierna @ Sep 17 2008, 01:59 PM)
Here's another good fic from FF.net - "You are All I Ever Wanted". It's thirty sentences of Suiseiseki and Souseiseki, and it even includes evil Souseiseki!!  :lol: And even DYING Souseiseki!!  :smile:  :smile:

Awwww :blush: .


Another one that I liked is Carpe Diem. A cute little fanfiction about Suigintou getting her revenge :wub: *giggles*. NSFW - contains Suigintou x Shinku yuri. It happens during the last episode of the first series and is pretty well written.

[spoiler]I just love when Gin-sama tortures Shinku :wub: *giggles*. It should happen more often in RM series :wub: ... It's soooo nice that this time she does it right and kills Nori, Jun and the other dolls before playing with Shinku*giggles*.[/spoiler]

Delight - September 17, 2008 11:57 PM (GMT)
I just finished reading an awesome doujinshi - C Series.
It's a darker and edgier alternative ending to RM series. It's based on a premise that Bara-bara and Shinku died somewhere during Träumend and that the Alice Game somehow ended without a winner.
It has an interesting graphics style and awesome combat choreography. I love it's atmosphere :wub: . I can't believe people can create such awesome things :wub: .

A torrent for the whole series can be downloaded
here.
A first part - Crossfire can be downloaded from Pinochan.

[spoiler]Poor Megu. Poor Suigintou. Poor Suiseiseki.[/spoiler]

Cafechan - September 18, 2008 09:22 PM (GMT)
^ Is is SFW?

This is probably the best RM fic I've read.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3334120/1/What_I_Didnt_Say

Delight - September 19, 2008 12:16 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (Cafechan @ Sep 19 2008, 12:22 AM)
^ Is is SFW?

Yes :D .

QUOTE (Cafechan @ Sep 19 2008, 12:22 AM)
This is probably the best RM fic I've read.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3334120/1/What_I_Didnt_Say

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww :aww: . Very Shinku :blush: .

Merines Shinku - September 20, 2008 04:10 AM (GMT)
I've read all those actually... XD
I still like Jun's Birthday: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3600326/1/ the best... Although, it's unfinished...

Cafechan - September 21, 2008 12:21 AM (GMT)
@ Delight,
Ooh, I can't wait to read it then >U<
Sigh... my Animal Crossing OST torrent's not downloading anyway. :<

-goes to read Jun's Birthday-

alice_pyon - September 26, 2008 08:51 AM (GMT)
AC crossing OST!!! I want...

Anyway, I like kokoa's fanfic :D ALOT
Jun's Birthday is fun too

kokoa - September 27, 2008 06:20 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (alice_pyon @ Sep 26 2008, 02:51 AM)
AC crossing OST!!! I want...

Anyway, I like kokoa's fanfic :D ALOT
Jun's Birthday is fun too

Thank You!!

I really like Jun's Birthday too, but towards the end, it became a bit weird [with the zombie dolls, and Kira jumping in towards the end].

SuiginxDosei - September 28, 2008 07:15 PM (GMT)
Indeed, Carpe Diem is pretty awesome !! Though me hates, hates, HAAATES GinxShinku (It's supposed to be GinxMegu and ShinkuxJun :P )
And I'm wondering
[spoiler]Where the banana did Gin-sama learnt so much about the human body ~kashira ?[/spoiler]

Delight - September 28, 2008 09:51 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (SuiginxDosei @ Sep 28 2008, 10:15 PM)
Indeed, Carpe Diem is pretty awesome !! Though me hates, hates, HAAATES GinxShinku (It's supposed to be GinxMegu and ShinkuxJun  :P )

I think it's forgivable, because the first series of the anime didn't have Megu :D .

QUOTE (SuiginxDosei @ Sep 28 2008, 10:15 PM)
And I'm wondering
[spoiler]Where the banana did Gin-sama learnt so much about the human body ~kashira ?[/spoiler]

[spoiler]I'm wondering too. After all, she didn't even have a medium. At least now we "know" that her real motivation to become Alice wasn't seeing the father :wink: [/spoiler]

***

I finished re-reading the C Series and I'm still stunned by their pure awesomeness. I just love that slim/dark/tall character style and faces of the characters and the brutality of combat which is fought mainly with melee weapons :wub: .

[spoiler]The beginning of Crossfire with Shinku and Bara bara torn in half is awesome.
It's interesting to see Suiseiseki so full of grim determination...
And then Megu getting killed and that explosion of emotion - pure awesomeness...
Somehow everyone seems to be tainted with darkness here.

Then the Conclusion - with even more gore and darkness...
I loved how Jun tried recreating Shinku and ended up creating a poor weakling girl who also wants to become someone else (oh, the irony :D !).
And then Suigintou getting mortally wounded in fight with Bara, who went completely nuts. I wonder what Suigintou means when talking about about "her" (Megu?) coming for her...

And then Shinku coming to doll heaven and meeting that psycho doppleganger doll :D . I love how her calmness in combat contrasts with fury and desperation of other combat scenes. She seems to like calling people "junk", though.
Also, I love how despite all that darkness and horror there is a bright and heart warming end :smile: [/spoiler]

Cafechan - September 30, 2008 10:03 PM (GMT)
The C Series was breathtaking. I love Jun's rebuilding of Shinku... she is like a daughter <3 So cute!! The art style was also really neat. Thanks a ton for the download!

Delight - November 30, 2008 07:43 PM (GMT)
Does anyone know any Manga-based fanfics?

Jun - December 6, 2008 03:24 AM (GMT)
The C series was awesome.




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