here made by me:

the anatonmy is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY off on this, you need to get better before you start posting tuts again

As Craddik stated, the anatomy isn't correct. Also, you aren't supposed to be posting tutorials. Remember the terms of Mattman and your battle?

I agree 100% it is very inaccurate.

small edit:


things to note:
*shoulders should be 3 heads wide
*entire body should be about 6 heads high (I went a tad higher)
*he has no crotch to speak of (I feel sorry for his wife)
*lower legs look swollen
*the pectorials are sagging lower than my grandma's breasts
*Reasearch a bit about the muscles in the arms and legs....especially arms
*your head is too large
*your legs are too squished and your torso too long
*hand should reach about mid thigh

thats enough for now. But I do want to mention that you have some decent knowledge of the muscles in the legs - just keep on researching and practicing

-Dan

Nice edit Indigo. That's very realistic.

sweet im gonna try this... is it okay if i edit your idigo???

Lol indigo...thats pretty funny. You just have to come out with (what, a 10 minute drawing?) something that will make this tutorial from a 3 to a 10. Excellent edit.

Small edit? You completely revised it, only keeping the skin colors. But yeah, it's a great show of anatomy. But I thought the average body height was seven heads?

heh, t'was a joke... small joke :)

and sk8: I'd rather you try your own instead of editing mine. You learn better/faster that way

EDIT::
oh and the average adult male is roughly 6, halfdemon. I usually stick to 6 and a half though.

hey where'd my post go?

Well i think it wasn't a very good approach you took to a tutorial Tomster, you just submitted an image with the only text

It does however become helpfull with Indigo's inclusion, as the mistakes you have made in you'r design are quite common and mainly deals with proportions which Indigo has given a quick run down over. Though not very specific with some bits *see the quotes bellow*, it isn't his tutorial so why the hell should he be specific.

:lol:

cool thanks (I'm making a fighter sprite, hope I get it right this time, it's really annoying I post a sprite the first post is "anatomy is off" every time)

That's A nice edit indigo, but you really should have asked for permission from tomster first.

art boards, such as this one, are made for critique, and that is what i did. It just so happend that I critiqued a tutorial. None-the-less, I said what needed to be said. If he has a problem with it, he can PM me.

Ok, sorry bout that Indigo, I just thought that you had to ask first.

Well imo, i think tomsters is much better. Tomster's one is alot more manly and has bigger muscles while the other is just weak looking. One problem i have with both though is they need 3 or 4 more abs, i think 6 alone just doesn't cut it.

yes a guy with a huge head and no crotch is very manly <.<

Craddik, I don't usually focus on crotch definition so heavily but now that you mention it, he could use a bigger package. Maybe you could rectify this problem by adding a massive schlong to him. And while you're at it you could add a few more biceps to make him stronger and another arm... or something.

But ok, maybe its not that good a representation of human anatomy, but its a pretty good depiction of a guy with down syndrome and a sex change. So 10/10 for the down syndrome transexual! :D

obviously you're acting like an idiot "tomsterROX" and honestly, I don't like it. actually, I know for a fact that there is nobody here that likes it. either fix your attitude or you'll be warned and possibly banned.

thank you joseph, i've been dying to tell him that. i was just about to too. lol

(XD) (XD) (XD) (XD) (XD) LOL SCHLONG????? BIGGER PACKAGE?????? are u coming onto me?? (O_O) (^x^)

(D=) Calm down Joseph, no need to put such a downer on the topic by bringing up the B-word. Im terribly sorry for my attitute, in future i will try and shape and conform my attitudes and personality to what you deem acceptable... sir. Or not. Whatever. ;)

im sorry, not for the earlier comment, but for reporting you. its not that I regret it, its just, you're so new, and yet so annoying. usually new people are quiet, but you, aha, you're another story. for starters, you're using the most hated members name in your own...which is just plain retarded, and you're using a calm attitute towards me yet using it effectively enough to be the most obnoxious person I know. I would rather listen to tomster ramble on about senseless insults than read anything you've said.

i totally agree with everything you just said...... but i should probably shut up now

shut up joseph and craddik, tomsterROX is annoying, I just dont like him, he's obviously being sarcastic

Lol.

lol?

Lol.

WTF do you mean?

I think he means 'Lol.' but that is only a guess o.O

Edit:
I will reconsider my usage of the internet

Hmm...you best calm down tomster, wouldn't want to see you banned again now would we.

Wouldn't we? ;)
No but seriously, guys. You need to tone it down a bit. I've had to use the report button more than I'd like to on a forum.
Please, for everyone's sake, just stop flaming each other and spamming.

Thanks! :)
-DM

damnit tomster. Why dont you learn from your mistakes? There is a discussion open in the mod forum about your pending Ban.

I got annoyed, I have anger issues, deal with it

I am dealing with it. And more sooner than later, you will be forced to deal with your consequence as well.

Meh, no reason to have this open. Indigo's made his point, the tutorial's up, and we surely don't need spamming and flaming.

Topic locked.