I'll only post two here for now... Tell me what you guys think! XD
Info: Some rhyme, some don't.



Lullaby of death.

There’s so much dark in the light
Yet this man still puts up a fight
But he can’t win
For he’s been done in
There’s no more for him
Every breath could be the last whim
He clutches his far and close soul
Wishing his pain would just roll
And slip through his weakened hand
He’ll lose it all like glass to the sand

His tears are of the agony
The disease in his heart
All of hope destroyed
The seams torn apart
He looks to his child
Of which can never come back
He weeps a sad tune
That of which could make heaven crack

His lullaby of death
Remorse to his love
Consists of forgiveness
That’s makes fly the dove
So he sings with regret
As the fight was never fought
His closes his eyes forever
To think what could never have been brought



My Rose out of Violets.

So there she is
My rose out of violets
The unique of the few
The key to my license
With love how I trust
This maiden of fair wonder
With it as our pillar
We'll never go under
But we'll sink and we'll swim
In a clear blue true love
To be saved my life's rope
To not feel hates shove
For she is my rose out of violets
The one so proud and tall
The growth of us might be hindered
But surely we'll never fall
For we go beyond the reach
Of the poets and the dreamers
Our bond is but unbroken
Filled and lined with committing streamers
So I look to her
My rose out of violets
Like fog she disappears before my eyes
And everyday without her thus
My heart and soul surely dies






Tell me if you want me to post more... I'm trying to find a way to get published, but so far no luck XD I have a ton of poems :)

I read the first one, I guess I liked it. I'm just not a big fan of poetry :P

~KE

wow you have a way with this kind of stuff i could never come up with anything like that.... ^~^

Pretty nice. I not really into poetry though. But still pretty nice.

Very good!

Wow, I really liked them ^_^ And I especially found myself becoming fond of your poem A Rose out of Violets <3 I love how every verse just sees to flow into the next, I really love them, your really good! You should post more <3