Prologue
Kyoto grinned at the massive army before him. He watched as his men were getting ready for battle. The enemy soldiers marched slowly towards ours. our men did the same. As we started to run the enemies started to yell and scream vigorously. Are men didn’t hear them. The two armies clashed together and swords flew around, arrows took men down. This battle will have many losses. Kyoto looked behind him as a hippogriff flew over the mountain. His army would have a hard battle fighting monsters and goblins. He took out his sword and ran into battle soon to find out the fate of the battle.
He jumped and spun around slicing a goblin then to parry an attack. After he parried he went to a soldier’s aid while another soldier finished of the other goblin.
As he ran to the soldier’s aid an arrow flew past him and hit the goblin. A few feet away he saw a troll. As his men were getting crushed he ran towards it and jumped on its back.
Its armor was cold like ice and its skin rough like rock. He took his sword and impaled the creature and heard it yell and fall to the ground. A goblin came and tried to catch him off guard, but he was waiting. Right before the goblin hit him he ducked and thrusted his sword around and hit the goblins legs. The goblin collapsed. He hated goblins. He heard a screeching cry. He covered his ears. The cry was still very loud though. Then he looked up and saw dragons flying around him. The knight on it jumped to the ground and took out his sword. I ran towards him and tried to stab him but he hit my sword aside and slashed his way across my chest. I grasped my armor as the pain kept burning. I swung my sword and the knight parried it and threw his sword towards me. I managed to dodge it and I said “you have no weapon how will you fight?” he then took out a large sword.
He threw his shield down knowing it would be to hard using both. “Now what were you saying?” he replied. I didn’t answer; I just ran towards him and jumped over his blade as he swung it with all his might. I took a breath and stabbed him through his lower chest plate. “I... can’t die………” he murmured. He fell to the ground and took his last breath, and closed his eyes. “Finally. That was tough” he said to himself clutching his breastplate. He noticed the goblins retreating. “We have won the battle!” he yelled to his men. Then he looked over to the gleaming mountain and saw an archer on top. It was an elf. Perhaps a bounty hunter. Then the elf fired an arrow at Kyoto’s head. It hit Kyoto and he stumbled backwards. He looked at the sky and disappeared from existence.
No one knows how it happened or why. That is all we know of Kyoto’s final battle.
One day he will arise and save the world from evil again, but that’s only a legend…
Or so they think………………………
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like it? i made it myself.

Very good,

I really like the way that was set out althugh you kept on jumping from first and third character, but if you ment that you saw kyoto killing things then why did you not put; I watched in oar as kyoto plunged his sword into the flesh of thebeast as it hit the ground it let out a low grumbling growl.
But over all very good and by the way i had a guess at how to spell oar.

Andy.

Andy you muppet he doesn't mean a boat oar he means he watched in awe, nice one chaos :D

thanks guys. :)

Sos my spelling isn't too good for little words that i dont use often, But i still really injoyed reading it and i think you should post the rest on this forum if you've done it, if not i would be happy to do what Choryo, Ninja and C4 have done buy writing bits here and there on a forum, Its up to you?

Andy.

thats all i have written. ill come up with more later.

Ok, where did you get the idea for this story from?

Andy.

i dunno. i just thought it up. i was bored. i guess to board.lol :P

lol yeah it's not bad, not bad at all

not bad for boredom. :P make aspamboard!

hmm could do, ill do it later

PWEASE!